I unfortunately don't have time right now to leave you a longer, more detailed review but I got tired of waiting for a better opportunity. XD
I love your writing style. I really, really do. It's lovely and elegant and it says a lot by saying very little. My favourite part is the word choice because... oh, because. How to explain that? You evoke images without even really getting into them just by picking these lovely, dangerous words.
People didn't hear much about weapons made of asphalt anyway.
That was my favourite sentence because it made me shiver a little. It just did.
I really love the sketchy, almost black and white quality about the characters and I ADORE the cameo. XD Mwahahah. I maybe squee'd rather embarrassingly.
Elena, the now investigator, felt as if she should have cigarette to put out at this part.
I know and love this feeling and I love that you know it too.
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(gonetoarcadia who has no real IJ ^^;)
Date: 2008-01-27 12:48 am (UTC)I love your writing style. I really, really do. It's lovely and elegant and it says a lot by saying very little. My favourite part is the word choice because... oh, because. How to explain that? You evoke images without even really getting into them just by picking these lovely, dangerous words.
People didn't hear much about weapons made of asphalt anyway.
That was my favourite sentence because it made me shiver a little. It just did.
I really love the sketchy, almost black and white quality about the characters and I ADORE the cameo. XD Mwahahah. I maybe squee'd rather embarrassingly.
Elena, the now investigator, felt as if she should have cigarette to put out at this part.
I know and love this feeling and I love that you know it too.
UM. In summary? You win all my love forever.